Writing Flash Fiction
Although there is no bonafide definition or length of the literary genre designated "flash fiction," it can be considered a fictionally-based story or tale, ranging from 100 to 1,000 words that nevertheless incorporates traditionally longer-story elements, including a beginning, a middle, and an ending, characters, character change, rising tension, climax, and resolution Romance.
It requires both a different skill
set and focus to craft. Described as "tight" and "brief,"
it mandates that every one of its words carry its maximum weight.
It is not a novel synopsis, part of
a longer story, or a short story pruned so that its word count does not exceed
the 1,000-maximum. Instead, it is a unique, modern-day, self-contained literary
form, which entails a short plot or a small concept. It can be considered a
story of a single act, which can be based upon several unwritten ones, leaving
the reader to surmise and understand. But it is complete in and of itself.
DERIVATION OF DESIGNATION:
During its evolution as an accepted
literary genre, flash fiction has been called several other names.
1). Sudden fiction.
2). Quick fiction.
3). Hint fiction.
4). Smoke-long stories.
ORIGINS:
Although not then known, flash
fiction as a genre can trace its roots to Aesop's Fables, a collection of
fables credited to Aesop, a slave and storyteller believed to have lived in
ancient Greece between 620 and 564 BC.
FLASH FICTION UNDERSTANDING:
Flash fiction can be better
understood with the following analogies:
It is like a bouillon cube before
you add the hot water to expand it into soup.
It is the isolated atom which, when
combined with the multitude of others, gives full form to the object.
Like an accounting spreadsheet, it
offers a snapshot in time.
Each word must carry the charge of
dynamite.
Don't say it-play it in the reader's
mind, by having him run the filmstrip you started, but were forced to edit into
brevity.
It is like losing your job in a
flash and having to live off the flash-in-the-pan called "unemployment
compensation." You delete, disregard, and discontinue everything you no
longer consider a necessity and use your mind and memory to fill in the areas
for which there is no money (in your life) and no remaining words (in your
flash fiction story).
It fosters practice in
"necessary compactness," which has benefit in even larger,
longer-winded pieces or genres.
It is the essence of the perfume
before the alcohol is added.
Writing flash fiction is like
emptying the 1,000 unassembled pieces from their jigsaw puzzle box onto your
dining room table and only finding 100 of them, yet still being expected to put
together a complete picture.
Flash fiction employs two media:
words and pictures, the latter of which are provided by the symbolism
substituted for the lack of letters.
It is the bud on the tree before spring
allows it to open into a full leaf.
Occupancy of this flash fiction room
by more than 1,000 words is considered unlawful-and genre-jumping.
FLASH FICTION FOUNDATION:
The writer's genre choice begins
with the size and scope of his idea. Small ideas become the foundations of
flash fiction pieces, for example, while large ones lend themselves to short
stories and possibly novels. The former entail laser focuses, single aspects,
themes, scenes, and conflicts, only vital dialogue, and a limited number of characters,
ranging from one to three or so. The latter include multiple chapters, scenes,
dialogue interactions, settings, subplots, and complexities.
A novel may illustrate the growth of
its main character during his decade-long quest to find himself as a person and
the obstacles which deter it. A flash fiction piece may only describe an
isolated incident in the quest, but must stand on its own and not rely on
anything other than what is included in it.
Every line should, if at all
possible, reveal the character and advance the plot.
TIP OF THE ICEBERG:
Because of the genre's length, it
can be considered a form comparable to the tip of an iceberg-that is, a single
line may be employed to hint at what lies beneath a character's or plot's
surface.
"When he was released from
prison after serving his embezzlement charge... ", for instance, makes a
significant statement about the protagonist's morals and indicates to the
reader that he must have had a shady, illegal past.
IN MEDIAS RES:
Latin for "in the middle of
things," it is a technique that applies to flash fiction. There is no
space for long beginnings and character histories. Instead, the reader should
be plunged into the piece at the moment of the inciting incident or at the
crossroads where the plot is set in motion. Consider the following sentence.
Picking up the gun and glancing at
the photograph of the girlfriend his business partner stole from him, Reginald
jumped into his car and floored the gas pedal, destined for his house. The
reader will surmise that there had been rivalry, betrayal, and disloyalty
between the two. His actions and the object he holds equally indicate what his
intention is.
SINGLE IDEA OR EMOTION:
The flash fiction genre mandates a
single idea or emotion, since there is little space in which to develop more
than one. However, the positive side to this seeming restriction is that the
writer can deeply explore it. In the previous example, the probed concept may
be revenge.
PERSONAL PERSPECTIVE:
While flash fiction is not a memoir
or autobiography, the writer should nevertheless not hesitate to probe his own
deepest feelings, beliefs, philosophies, and emotions, and bare them on the
page. Because of its condensed nature, a raw essence can be an asset. Forced to
grab his reader's attention from the first line, the author should do so with
his deepest, darkest secrets or brightest, most hopeful dreams transferred to
his character(s). The more significant they are to the writer, the more
passionate they will appear to the reader. If he is unable to tap into such a
place within himself, then he should invent, expand, and embellish. This is,
after all, fiction.
CHARACTER CARING:
Although an author can only expect
his readers to provide a short amount of attention as they devote their time to
reading what he has written, nothing will matter more in their investment than
a character or characters about whom they care. The more they immerse
themselves in the experience, the realer they will become. The author needs to
evoke their empathy, sympathy, understanding, and kindred spirit share of life
journey commonality, giving them a glimpse of their own.
EMOTIONAL ELEMENTS:
Flash fiction, because of its
length, can only incorporate the essential characters, interactions, and acts
that complete its tale. If the writer devises a plot that cannot be told in
anything under 1,000 words, for instance, then he is not writing flash fiction.
FLASH FICTION ANALYZED:
"(Flash fiction) pieces still
contain a bit of story movement, some kind of change from the beginning to the
end... (A) bit of story change can be all that distinguishes a flash story from
a vignette or slice of life piece," according to Carly Berg in her book,
"Writing Flash Fiction" (Magic Lantern Press, 2015, p. 1).
"... A story can come out of nowhere
like a lightning bolt and leave the reader wondering what it actually was that
hit him" she continues (ibid, p. 2).
The genre affords the budding writer
an opportunity to quickly amass a collection of flash fiction stories, because
they are short, require little time to pen, and result in initial experience.
"With so little space to tell a
story," she states (ibid, p. 3), "you soon hone your craft. Every
word has to carry its weight or be cut. Word flab bores readers in any type of
writing, so writing flash fiction is excellent training in sharp, concise
writing."
IDEA ORIGINS:
As with all writing, flash fiction
ideas can sometimes begin with a spark, such as an image, a feeling, a
recollection, or a fragment. If that idea were a skeleton, it would only take
human form if you hung flesh onto it. You can do the same here. Allow it to
become the threshold to a story or tale, giving it shape with additional,
related ideas, thoughts, and sentences.
Tap into your creativity and
imagination. Pluck your past for events, incidents, memories, experiences, and
people. Although fiction, flash stories can certainly "borrow"
factual elements from your life.
Piece these elements together and
expand upon them, sometimes in a creative and unexpected way. Put the proverbial
cart before the horse if it leads to something interesting and fresh.
Your piece does not necessarily have
to take form all at once. Again, as with any writing genre, you can record
ideas in a notebook. If kept next to your bed, you may be able to capture
startling, unsettling, meaningful, and/or unfinished dreams as soon as you wake
up before they trail from memory.
INSPIRATION:
Inspiration can come in and from
many forms and sources, as follows.
1). Your life and its numerous
incidents.
2). People you know or once did.
3). Previous writings.
4). Writings of other authors.
5). Music.
6). Feelings.
7). Images, artwork, and
photographs.
8). Writing prompts.
9). Walks, new activities, travel,
and breaks from your daily routine.
CHARACTERS:
Because a flash fiction story's
length does not permit any degree of character development over time, it would
be unrealistic for the writer to concentrate on more than a few.
"Consider what kind of
personality each character has and make sure they act and speak in a way that
lives up... ," according to Berg (ibid, p. 18). "With very short
stories, sometimes we just get a glimpse of a character. We only see an aspect
of his personality."
SETTINGS:
There is no space for long setting
descriptions. "Give us something about the time and place in the
beginning... ," Berg advises (ibid, p. 20). "We don't necessarily
need to know the city or date... "
The author must be brief and
concise. Instead of a long description about a blizzard, for instance, the
writer may imply this fact. Consider this method. "Although Regina had
only been speaking with her brother for 20 minutes, the snow had already
covered the tops of her boots." The implication here is that it is snowing
very hard. This provides the reader with an anchor. The snow should be
important to the setting and hence the story as a whole, however.
DIALOGUE:
Dialogue should be kept to a minimum in flash fiction and any character utterance considered unnecessary should be eliminated, but should, if at all possible, reveal something about the character himself and advance the story Abfictionstories.
Speech reflects people's educational
levels, personality, regional accents, and life experiences. Incomplete
sentences, nonstandard grammar, and clichés become realistic reflections of
them.
FLASH FICTION BEGINNINGS:
"Flash fiction gets down to
business right away," according to Berg (ibid, p. 22). "There's no
room to fill us in on a bunch of backstory or sit through a whole meal with the
family making chitchat, before the stranger knocks at the door or the monster
peers through the window. Have the story begin just before that action that
changes everything. Give us the main characters' names, an idea of the time and
place, and start the story problem or what the character wants."
THE MIDDLE:
Characterized by rising tension, the
middle of a flash fiction story is the section where the main character strives
to achieve or fulfill his desire for something or someone, but it is also here
where the antagonist opposes him. Although standard, short fiction may
incorporate a series of progressively more difficult and mounting
circumstances, there is seldom space for more than a single obstacle or problem
in the flash fiction genre.
"... Make sure there is a
problem," advises Berg (ibid, p. 23). "The main character has to want
something that he can't get, and the story is about if he gets it or not, or
moves toward one of those ends."
CLIMAX:
Because of the protagonist's
opposing force, tensions rise and reach a fever pitch in the climax, revealing
whether his quest was successful or unsuccessful.
FLASH FICTION WRITING TECHNIQUE
SUMMARY:
1). Small Idea: Look for the smaller
ideas in larger ones and transform them into flash fiction plots. Anything that
cannot be covered to completion and conclusion in 1,000 words or less is not
flash fiction.
2). Title: Choose an enticing,
evocative, or intriguing one, but do not reveal the story's climax or
resolution with it. Titles can serve as initial hooks.
3). Hook: Snag the reader with an
interesting or unique hook so he will invest his time and continue reading the
story.
4). In Medias Res: Latin for
"in the middle of things," it is a technique that places the reader
in the midst of the inciting incident, at the crossroads that ultimately lead
to conflict, climax, and change.
5). Conflict: Put your characters in
conflict with someone or something-antagonists that pose barriers to the
achievement of their goals or quests. Because of the genre's length
restriction, limit yourself to only one conflict. But whatever it is, it must
be successfully resolved in 1,000 words or less.
6). Image: As has often been said,
"A picture is worth a thousand words." Since this is the flash
fiction genre's upward limitation, this technique is particularly meaningful
and may enable the author to eliminate unnecessary words and descriptions.
Select a powerful, memorable one, such as a war-torn street, a dying
grandparent, or a sunset on Mars. Within that setting the plot can unfold.
7). Emotions: Choose, like the
image, a strong, resonant one, pairing the two. In the case of the dying
grandparent, the emotion may be extreme sadness or sympathy or even awe during
the soul's transition from the physical to the eternal world.
8). Characters: Space limitations
restrict the number of characters to one, two, or three. Four may be stretching
it. This also reduces the need for descriptions, interactions, dialogue, and
scenes.
9). Scenes: Again, space limitations
may only permit one or two.
10). Narrators: Flash fiction is
most effective when first-person (I) or third-person (he or she) narrators are
used.
11). Mystery: Do not reveal the
story's resolution until the end-that is, during and after the climax. Allow
the mystery to unfold for the reader.
12). Twist: Since you have no time
to build up sympathetic characters and develop the complicated plot that has
affected them, an ending with a twist may be advisable and inevitable. Almost
like a joke, flash fiction offers a punch line at its end.
13). Tight Writing: In order to
minimize the space you need, examine every word and phrase and eliminate
anything that does not pull its weight.
REVIEWING AND REVISING:
Writing, regardless of the genre,
entails reviewing, rewriting, and revising. When you feel you have a finished
product, employ one or all of the following strategies.
1). Disconnect from your piece for
several days. Then re-read it. It may not necessarily sound as polished as you
originally believed it was after you have placed some time and distance between
it and you. You will view it from a fresh perspective.
2). Read it aloud, placing a second
sense on its structure and flow.
3). Have someone else read it, but
keep in mind that a friend or relative may be too close to you and your
feelings to be objective.
4). Assess the need for the
exposition (telling), narrative (showing), and narrative summary sections that
you have included. Showing, as you may recall from other workshops, "...
means putting the characters on stage and giving us a front row seat to the
show," said Berg (ibid, p. 33).
5). Be sure that you have chosen a
tale that fits within the flash fiction category. If it requires several pages
and more than 1,000 words to tell, it may be more suitable as a short fiction
piece.
6). Ensure the cohesion of your
story--that is, does one event logically follow the previous one and are
characters consistent with their actions and speech.
7). Focus on character personality,
not physical description.
8). Be sure that your writing is as
tight as possible. (See the "Tightening your Writing" workshop lesson.
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